1. In my essay I made similar mistakes that I commonly do. My friend is a native English speaker. Though I could figure out my mistakes, she explained them to me more vividly. Some of my errors are: a. Use of articale the: The first reason that I like country life better than city life is the [...]
Archive for April, 2008
The final post
Posted in Uncategorized on April 15, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Posted in Assignments on April 15, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Working with my partner helped me understand a bit more the use of commas. My problem is that I always put them where I don’t need them. For example: “I never thought of how different life could be for those people who live in the countryside, and have direct contact with nature and animals, to [...]
Final Post
Posted in Uncategorized on April 14, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
As i work with Paul i learned about run on and comma those are the common mistakes on my paper. To fix my run on i need to put period intead of comma to separate two independant clauses. Paul also fix one of my sentece to make it stronger. ORGINAL: The interesting thing about this is [...]
My Last Post
Posted in Uncategorized on April 14, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
During my peer review, I found that I had got alot better with big mistakes, and now just need to make sure that reread my papers before I turn them in. My partner was Tony and he helped me answer some of the Questions that Mr. Keleher asked in my paper. I also helped him with some [...]
The last Post
Posted in Assignments on April 14, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
1)In my peer time, I noticed that the my problems with comma splices is getting better, but I still make some mistakes. Example: Event though Spain has many nice cities and it has a very interesting culture. I forgot to put a comma after the word “cities”. Another thing, it is that I need to [...]
Final Post
Posted in Uncategorized on April 14, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
1. – I had many commas place. Ex: “I do not agree with that idea, also I…”. “I do not agree with that idea. Also I…”. – One off my common mistakes was spelling. Ex:”witch they seem to call…”. “which they seem to call…”. – I need to be more specific on what I want [...]
Final Post
Posted in Assignments on April 13, 2008 | 1 Comment »
1) I worked with patel. We both had some of the same type errors. a) I had some redundant (as usual) b) I did not put (the) in front the city, country. c) SP_ I had couple of spelling errors. 2) I think my participation should be A+++++++++++++++++++++. My attendance was very good. I had good [...]
Final Post
Posted in Assignments on April 12, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
1. a) I learned not to place commas before every coodinating conjuction because. They should be use just when there is an independent clause follow by a dependent clause. It helps to connect them. ” Colombians are very educated and are known around the world for being the best Spanish speakers”. I used to place [...]
answers
Posted in Assignments on April 11, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
i did my corrections with marjan. incorrect: people can get good jobs with desire wages. correct: peple can good jobs with disirable wages in thee city. incorrect: people who belongs to any category rich, poor, or middle class can survive in city. correct: people who beongs to any category, rich, poor, or middle class can [...]
Final Post
Posted in Uncategorized on April 10, 2008 | 3 Comments »
Today I worked with Lucia. She was great. She and I were both knowledgeable of our errors and made the corrections. We both had some of the same type errors. 1. Run ons-There was a big fight, but Michael had no idea he was in a fight he was still high. There was a big fight, but [...]
