As i work with Paul i learned about run on and comma those are the common mistakes on my paper.
To fix my run on i need to put period intead of comma to separate two independant clauses.
Paul also fix one of my sentece to make it stronger.
ORGINAL: The interesting thing about this is kids in the country are not exposed to the entire toys we have in the city.
CORRECTION:The interesting thing about it is unlike the kids in the city,the country kids receive less toys but they are much happier with what they get.
Talking about participating grade, i was five minutes late 2 or 3 times,sick one time and i notified my instructor ,my quizzes were not that bad.Overall i can give miself and A or A-
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