1. In my essay I made similar mistakes that I commonly do. My friend is a native English speaker. Though I could figure out my mistakes, she explained them to me more vividly.
Some of my errors are:
a. Use of articale the:
The first reason that I like country life better than city life is the fresh environment.
Word choice:
We can feel like more homeliness (familiar) in countries than in cities.
Run on and comma splits:
On the other hand, the environment in country is still pure and fresh.
2.My grade:
I present in class regularly (hoping the first day is exclusive). My quizz scores are good and though my blog postings are not excellent, i am posting them on time. So In my evaluation my participation grade is A-, but i don’t know do i really deserve that or not?
