I can remember planning the rehearsal dinner before the wedding. We planned everything from the beginning until the end, the gowns, tuxedo’s, the reception, I mean everything. Never in my wildest dream did I think I would miss this day, but I did. I can remember planning everything before the wedding, the food, the gowns, [...]
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To conversational
Posted in Fragments on March 11, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Fragments
Posted in Fragments on March 11, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
And help with the wedding–I can stop by today and help you with the wedding.
Fragments
Posted in Fragments on February 5, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Born January 20 1990 to Mr. and Mrs. Robert Foley Sr. of Norcross, Georgia. Bobby was born on January 20, 1990 to Mr. and Mrs. Robert Foley Sr. of Norcross, Georgia. When the time comes I will. When the time is right I will go home. The basketball game tonight. The basketball game tonight starts [...]
errors!
Posted in Fragments on February 5, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
incorrect: He couldn’t undertant why he could not do something more exciting for example to drow a scenery. correct: He couldn’t undertant why he could not do something more exceting, for example, to drow a scenery.
my errors
Posted in Fragments on February 5, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
wrong:Her teacher told her to write about,and if she did write it was on a subject matter that she knew nothing about. correct:Her teacher told her to write about, and, if she did write, it was on a subject matter that she knew nothing about. WRONG:I did not like to go to the gym, and if i [...]
My mistakes
Posted in Fragments on February 4, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Besides that she developed her writing skills from comprehension questions. Where she had to express her thoughts or analyze about the given subject matter.(Incorrect) Besides that she developed her writing skills from comprehension questions, where she had to express her thoughts or analyze about the given subject matter.(Correct)
